Monday, April 18, 2011

Adolf Hitler

        Adolf Hitler was born on April 20th 1889 in Braunau-am-Inn, Austria. when he was growing up with a poor record at school and he left school. His mother, Klara, had previously given birth to other children by Alois { Gustav and Ida} but they both died in the infancy. Alois Hitler had died when Adolf was thirteen and klara briugth up adolf and Paula on her own. 
in 1909, he moved to Vienna.
       In 1913 Adolf hitler was a penniless vagrant, he moved to Munich in southern Germany. At the outbreack of the first world war, in 1914, he volunteered for service in the German army. Hitler fought bravely in the war was promoted to corporal.
      Early Politics 1918-1919,
Between December 1918 and March 1919 Hitler worked at  45 prisoner-of-war camp at Traunstein before returning again to Munich. Shortly after his return he withnessed a tackover bid by local communists who seized power before being ousted by the army.
   The First Hofbrauhaus Speech- 1919-1920
       Given responsibility for publicty and propaganda, Hiitler first succeeded in attracting over a hundred in the munich Hofbrauhaus.Hitler made a groud of people and called them the Nazi. they were the most powerful army in that time in Germany an they tryed to take over Munich many times but he never seceded to do well.

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  1. Paragraph #1 -
    April 20, 1889
    When he was growing up, he had a poor record...
    Adolf
    died when he wa 13?

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    Hitler was a penniless vagrant.
    He moved
    outbreak
    no comma after was
    and was promoted

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    March
    45 (space needed before prisoner)
    witnessed
    takeover
    by (remove "a") local

    Paragraph #4 - Rewrite the Given sentence in your own words.
    Hitler, himself,
    Socialist erman?

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